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I’m having a hell of a time…

19 Monday Aug 2013

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in Avoiding writing, e-books, Finny Aletter, Writing tips

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We won't call it writer's block

17997208-brain-intelligence-discovery-with-a-human-brain-shape-made-of-stars-and-planets-in-a-space-beckgroun…getting back into my WIP. I’ve been in merchandizing mode all summer with my two Finny Aletter mysteries, Scavenger Hunt and Obstacle Course, and my brain is skipping across a meadow of clever ploys to interest an indifferent Web. How many times can I artfully mention the titles before I’m shunned by all and sundry? Sigh.

However, my A Signal Shown manuscript is sitting beside me and it needs to be finished. How lovely it would be to see how the story ends so I can stop wondering about it.  And afterward I’d have a shiny new opportunity to write the third Wisdom Court novel, a prospect filling me with both excitement and raw terror. I’ve not had enough energy for such visceral emotions during this summer of the slug.

How, oh, how can I gracefully–or even awkwardly–transition from sales whore to dedicated creator of immortal fiction? Well…here’s my plan. Ostensibly, I’m merely nattering to my hardy band of followers, but if I keep moving my fingers over the keys, magic will happen. That tiny ember of creativity lodged somewhere in my brain stem will burst forth–or even fifth–to release the words hovering near the ember.  It’s getting crowded in there, so the phrases will come tumbling through the synapses, down my spine, stampeding into both arms, thundering out through my always-moving fingers.

Any minute now.

Dammit.

I’m going to have to actually work on this thing, aren’t I? I’ll need to stop fiddle-farting around and reread the manuscript. I’ll find the inevitable typos and will enter corrections, and that will lead to thinking of better ways to say what’s on the page.  Then, God help me, I’ll get that nasty urge to cut a paragraph or two, just to prove I can kill my darlings. I hate that part. But I’ll do it, and that pathetic pile of what used to be my writer’s ego will show signs of revival. There’s nothing like the blood of dead descriptions and defunct characters to get that bastard pulsing again.

So now I’m off to find an illustration of the brain so all of you can see where the process begins, because I wouldn’t want there to be any confusion about it. That won’t take long, just a bit of trolling on the Web, and then I’ll start reading…wait, I’ll have to find my red pen. It’s around here somewhere; I saw it this morning.  Okay, got it.

I’ll be back at it before you can blink an eye.

See?

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Writers need all the help they can get–at least this one does…

31 Wednesday Jul 2013

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And I read a post from Writers in the Storm today where I found some.  For years I’ve gone through my copy carefully for repeated words because I always find them.  Something about choosing a word is a signal to my brain to reuse it. Waste not, want not, right? As a reader I hate repetition, so it’s the last thing I want to commit as a writer. WITS has provided the names of several sites where such misdeeds can be caught, counted, and dealt with. And I’m grateful.  Do yourself a favor and click on the link below.  Cheers!

What is an “Echo?” Tips To Axe These Repeat Offenders.

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Have I got a freebie for you!

08 Monday Jul 2013

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in e-books, Finny Aletter, Yvonne Montgomery mysteries

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Book One

Book One

My first mystery, Scavenger Hunt, is free on Amazon.com today.  Go to: http://amzn.to/13HDk9j and check it out.

I would dearly love to read some reviews from you out in blogland.  Let me know what you think of my immortal prose.

As Finny says, “A woman’s gotta do what a woman’s gotta do.”

Cheers!

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Here they are–and by that I mean at Amazon.com–at last

07 Friday Jun 2013

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in e-books, Finny Aletter, Murder, Mysteries, Yvonne Montgomery mysteries

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Book One

Greetings, gentle readers.  As promised, my two mysteries, Scavenger Hunt and Obstacle Course, are now available at the Kindle Books section of Amazon.com.  And if i can figure out how to do it, I’ll show you the covers … Look!  I figured out how to do it!

These are the first books I published, set in the Capitol Hill section of Denver, starring Finny Aletter, a stockbroker who’s decided to take the carpentry skills she’s acquired while restoring her own century-old house and use them to build a new career for herself.  Before she can exit gracefully, her boss and former lover is murdered, and Finny finds herself at the top of the suspects list.  If she can’t convince Denver Police Detective Chris Barelli she’s innocent, she’ll never get to find out if it’s fear or attraction making her heart beat faster whenever he shows up.  And if she can’t discover if a rumored manuscript actually exists, she’ll never escape the world of scavengers.

Obstacle Course finds Finny launching her her house restoration career at a chi-chi party among Denver’s upper-crust but the celebration turns grim when a controversial judge is murdered.  Finny puts carpentry aside for detection when her patron and friend, Twee Garrett, becomes the prime suspect.  Finny’s introduction to the Denver social whirl becomes a fight for survival as she navigates the roadblocks of secrets and lies between her and the truth.

I had fun going through the books again, and I hope you will, too.  If you’d be kind enough to review them, I’ll love you forever.  The books will be coming out at BN, iBooks, and Kobo, as well as Sony, Ingram, and Overdrive over the next couple of months.

Book TwoClick the pictures and see what happens!

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All of my excuses are gone…

11 Thursday Apr 2013

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in Ghosts, Hauntings, Random Thoughts, Wisdom Court, Writing

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kick in the butt time, writing process

We had the visit from our son.  Ditto from the old college friend.

I gathered all the relevant info and we completed taxes over the weekend.

I’m not sick anymore.  I’m not on extra taxi duty for the grandchildren anymore.

We survived the incredibly over-hyped blizzard of 2013, April Edition.

I dumped all my cookies and got my Mac to work faster.

It’s too early to plant stuff, unless I cut up the sprouting potato in my kitchen and put pieces into the ground, sans a full moon, and of course with a tip of my hat to St. Patrick, upon whose day potatoes are supposed to be planted.

The laundry falling over the edges of the hamper is just too lame to consider a real excuse.  It is entirely possible to type while nude, and I have clean blankets to wrap around myself when my teeth start chattering.

It’s time to get back to the book.

Kicking, screaming, eyes rolling back into my head, I must go back into A Signal Shown, the second book of the Wisdom Court Trilogy.  My characters are standing in the wings of my mind, arms folded over their chests, toes tapping impatiently.  Even the spirits haunting Wisdom Court have threatened to move to a different old house if I don’t give them some attention.

It’s not that I hate the book.  On the contrary, I love it. I’m crazy about my characters and I know they have tons to tell me about how the plot has thickened while I’ve been Taking Care of Important Things.  And writing will make me feel better because it helps control my inner virago, the one who monotonously shrieks, “Tell me a story, tell me a story.  Tell Me Now!”  Her I’m not so crazy about.

No, I’ve been riding the U.S.S. Avoidance for a while and it hasn’t pulled into port.  Much as it pains me, I’ll have to jump over the side and swim to shore.  If I can steer clear of subsequent grooming rituals, as well as word games to “get my ducks in a row,” I’ll actually get to the computer and Start Again.

First I have to copy edit this blog post.

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Boomer Gothic and a Year of Her Own

14 Thursday Feb 2013

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Barbara Michaels, Bronte sisters, mansions, Mary Stewart, shadows, Victoria Holt

Back in the day, my favorite fiction genre was gothic, and I read as many such novels as I could find.  My favorite authors were Mary Stuart, Charlotte and Jane Bronte, Phyllis A. Whitney, Barbara Michaels, Elsie Lee, Dorothy Eden, Victoria Holt, Joan Aiken..the list is long. As an English major in college I read Walpole’s The Castle of Otranto, and discovered Anne Radcliffe, Wilkie Collins’s The Moonstone, more Poe, some of Dickens, Austen’s Northanger Abbey, Stevenson’s Dr. Jeckyll and Mr. Hyde.  You get the drift.

By the time I got serious about writing, the market for gothics had pretty much dried up, and I was reading mysteries.  I decided to write one set in Denver, and after hundreds of years and thousands of revisions, I published two of them, the previously mentioned Finny Aletter mysteries, Scavengers and Obstacle Course (both soon to appear as e-books.)

But, in my heart of hearts, I still yearned for gothics.  I wanted to tell myself a story set in an old house where odd things happened, and I wanted to create characters who began to regard each other with suspicion.  Dark psychological overtones would match the shadowy corners and somewhere along the line, a scream would split the night.  Good times would ensue.  Thus was born Wisdom Court.

Set in Boulder, Colorado, Wisdom Court is an institute for accomplished women who have not yet achieved their professional goals.  Each is invited to spend a year there (short trips home allowable, but most time is spent in Boulder), all expenses paid.  Artist, scientist, writer, whomever the Board chooses, receives a year of her own.

Andrea Bellamy, the protagonist in book I, Edge of the Shadow, is a forensic artist who yearns to paint, and her invitation to Wisdom Court allows her to imagine a new career as a fine artist. Widowed some years earlier, she has seen her daughter through college and now has the opportunity to truly change her life. She takes a leave of absence from her job, rents out her house, and heads for Boulder.  She is welcomed at Wisdom Court by the staff and other associates staying there.  As she settles into bed that first night, her heart is filled with gratitude and her mind races with excitement.  At last she will be able to focus on her artistic dreams.  For at least this one year she can put herself first.  And then she awakes screaming…

You’ll have to read Edge of the Shadow to find out what happens to Andrea and the other women at Wisdom Court.  The book will be published online in the next few months.  I’m writing about it now out of curiosity.  Having written EOS as well as being two-thirds into the second Wisdom Court book, A Signal Shown, I’m wondering how many fellow gothic fans are out there.  I don’t yet have throngs of blog followers, but I’m impatient enough to issue the question anyway: how many readers out there are interested in gothics?  The Wisdom Court story arcs through three books, so I’m committed to at least the trilogy.  Will I find readers to share in the pleasures?  Let me know.  I’ll keep writing.

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Posted by Yvonne Montgomery | Filed under 19th century novels, e-books, Gothic, Hauntings, Wisdom Court

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Okay, so we’ll skip right over November…

30 Friday Nov 2012

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in e-books, Finny Aletter, Mysteries, Technology and Writing, Yvonne Montgomery mysteries

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Avoiding writing, writing process

Although it made me very happy.

I’ve been busy-busy reviewing the e-formatted manuscript of my first mystery, Scavengers.  Thanks to the wonderful work of Nina Paules of eBook Prep, thiswas not an ordeal.  Since I always have to be dragged kicking and screaming into the next new thing, at least technologically speaking, I did whimper a bit and had to be sweet-talked into opening the files, but it all worked out.  And soon, gentle readers, my first foray into mysteries will be available at various venues.  My second mystery, Obstacle Course, will be next.  More about this later.

I’m also very near the point of sending off queries again for my current work, Edge of the Shadow, the first of the Wisdom Court paranormal novels.  Several good souls have read the manuscript, made corrections & suggestions, which I’ve noted and included.  I’ve almost finished the final nit-picky part and am printing it out, so it won’t be long.  It’s my goal to then get back to the second Wisdom Court novel, A Signal Shown, and finish it.  That won’t happen before the end of the year, but that’s okay.

I told you I’ve been busy-busy.  And now it’s time to hunt for a recipe for gluten-free fruit cake.  I am one of the few hardy souls who love fruit cake.  And now I can’t eat the real McCoy.  So, since last year’s recipe was a disappointment, I’ll try again.  Soon, so I’ll have time to soak it with brandy.  Or maybe I’ll just drink the brandy, and then try the fruit cake.  It’ll work.

Cheers!

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Moving at the speed of tectonic plates

15 Monday Oct 2012

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in e-books, Mysteries, Writing, Yvonne Montgomery mysteries

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Character, RMFW, Spock, writers conference

It’s been too long since I’ve posted, but that’s because things have been moving along.  I’ve actually begun the process toward digitizing my mysteries, Scavengers and Obstacle Course.  I’ve sent money and everything.  It should take about three weeks and a little longer for the second, and then I’ll start through the learning curve of getting them both up on sites, such as Amazon and Barnes & Noble.

I’ve also decided to make one more attempt to get my first Wisdom Court book, Edge of the Shadow, in front of a publisher.  I’d just about decided to self-publish, but after the excellent panels at the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold Conference, I thought that, before I start my own business, which is what self-publishing would be, I’ll give it another shot.  Writing time is at a premium anyway without adding more stuff I’d rather someone else do.  Like publish my book(s).   So, into the breach, my hearties, more polishing, queries, synopses–the activities that build my character (no, not characters, character.)  Have I mentioned how many additions I have on the structure that is my character?  I’ll write a tone poem about it some day.

As for now, since I’m getting sleepy, I will send my best hopes to all you writers out there.  May your manuscripts glow with the care you’ve given them, may agents and publishers wonder where you’ve been all their lives.  As a great writer once said, “Live long and prosper.” Surely Spock wrote as well as he did everything else.  (Ack, I’m trying to get my fingers to separate properly.  Oh, the hell with it.)

Good night.

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Now the year begins…

10 Monday Sep 2012

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Today feels like the first day of school.  I swear I smell chalk in the air, and if I imagine a high-gloss shine on the floors I can almost detect the scent of wax, too.  After a weekend at the Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Colorado Gold Conference, I’m as eager as a gap-toothed third-grader with the whole world before her.

Thanks to thought-provoking panels and excellent speakers, my backpack is once again loaded with sharpened tools and inspiration.  Sure, sometimes kids gathered in motley groups on the playground to mutter about recalcitrant agents and authoritarian publishers.  Everybody looked nervous at hearing more details unfold about changes in the industry.  But it’s hard not to gain optimism from people who struggle with the magnificent fascinations and frustrations of creating worlds and populating them with the characters who live inside us.  We writers–of all levels and accomplishments–are generous toward one another, sharing techniques and celebrating each others achievements.

Today I look at my to-do list and mentally roll up my sleeves.  I can solve those problems with chapter fourteen, and I will find a way to get my work out there again.  I may be alone in my garret but I’m one of many who work to interpret the world through imagination, creativity, and experience.

I have work to do, stories to tell, readers to find.  It’s the first day.

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Once upon a time…

02 Thursday Aug 2012

Posted by Yvonne Montgomery in e-books, Finny Aletter, Life, Murder, Mysteries, Writing

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I wrote two books about Finny Aletter.  A Denver stockbroker, she decided to give up an exciting life of money and trading and living on the edge to rehab old houses.  Yeah, it was the eighties, and she was burned out.  Time for a hands-on job, time for simplicity she could get her mind around.  But something happened, and the more basic life she craved was complicated by murder.

I’ve begun the process of formatting my two Finny Aletter mysteries for publication on-line, which will take a bit of time, so I thought I’d introduce her to you, my charming audience.  I still walk by her house a couple of times a week, and I’m waiting to hear what she’s up to these days.  (Her house was modeled on a gingerbread-trimmed three-story beauty I toured with a friend back in the day.)

Finny was a parallel image–of sorts–to my own life.  After earning my B.A. in English Lit. (Go, Buffs!) I worked with several Law Enforcement Assistance Administration anti-crime programs, including one of Denver’s youth services bureaus, designed to divert juvenile offenders from the justice system.  (I swear to God, you can do anything with an English Lit. degree.)  After a couple of years, my husband & I wanted to reproduce our glorious genes & I left juvenile crime to raise my own little potential criminals.  I went from fighting crime–so I wrote grants and reports, it counts–to voluntarily becoming a domestic.

We lived–and continue to live–in a century-plus-old house, Victoria Turtleshell, and over the years we’ve repaired, renovated, and sobbed quietly in corners over never-ending maintenance.  I’d done my research on rehabbing.  And, having chosen to be a stay-at-home mom, I’d discovered that I had no standing in our society.  At parties, when asked what I did for a living, a truthful answer produced glazed eyes and fellow guests wandered away.  In spite of my sparkling personality!  I began to lie.  “I’m a brain surgeon,” I’d say, then sneer at the lawyer-therapist-designer who’d asked and made MY eyes glaze, whereupon I’d stagger away, since it’s hard as hell to see where you’re going when your eyes are glazed.

Soon I grew weary of such games.  I’d already experienced the epiphany every would-be writer goes through, that fatal moment when one sets down an unsatisfactory book and proclaims, “I can do better than THAT.”  Clearly, it was time to prove it.  And, my character could leave a somewhat glamorous life in order to join the eighties return to the Arts and Crafts movement, or whatever they were calling it.  She, too, would go through the angst of trading one world for another.  More importantly, when people asked me my profession, I could say, “I’m a writer.”  No glazed eyes after a statement like that.  No, eyes sparkled as eighty-five percent of those who asked wanted to tell me about the books they would write someday when they had time.  The other fifteen percent wanted to know where I got my ideas.  Alas, it took a long time to invent an answer: The Idea Store.

I will draw a curtain over the years that followed, at least for now.  (Writers will use anything as grist for the mill, but I’m too short on time today to rake up what can only be called an eccentric adventure in getting published.  And in a decent mood, which wouldn’t last.)

Finny came into being and eventually starred in her own books.  Only two, but two is a plural.

And that, dear readers, is where we stop for today.

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